Mondays Finish the Story gives us a photo prompt and the first line of the tale, inviting us to finish the story in 100-150 words. Thanks to Babso2you for bringing us this weekly challenge, I hope you like what I’ve done with it this week.
Moving forward
Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life. Her thoughts always gravitated towards him, towards the hurt he’d inflicted on her, on her family. When would she be free of the cloud over her head, reminding her of all those bad decisions.
Taking deep breaths, closing her eyes, the wind and the spray washed over her. Taking one step, then another, the water felt cool against her skin. She went further and further, eyes still closed, concentrating on nothing but the elements around her. She felt at peace with herself, ready to face what lay in front of her.
‘Hey! Hey! Stop!’
The voice didn’t register with her, but the strong arms pulling her from the water were harder to ignore. Opening her eyes, they were met by the dark eyes of her rescuer. So, this is what lay in front of her then. Interesting.
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It is really good that the man rescued her. Now she has something good to look forward to. Enjoyed your story very much!
Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Love the ending, “So this is what lay in front of her.” Now I want to hear the rest of the story. Very nice.
Thanks Margo. I’m also intrigued to see what happens and where they go, perhaps these characters are worth exploring further.
Ummmmm…. rescued by a dark-eyed stranger, a very good place to start. Very nice!!!
Thanks. This could be an intriguing story.
A lovely romance brewing here…can you write more? Thanks for participating in the MFtS challenge! I hope that you return next week! Be well… ^..^
Thanks Babs. This story seems well received, I need to explore this couple further and tell more of their story.
Would love to read more!